Hi there!

Thanks for checking out the rough copy of my graphic novel(la). Too long to be a comic book, too short to be a graphic novel.

Anyhoo, these are just the rough drawings. A few panels (a few?) need to be redrawn but other than that, I’d like to know what you think of the story. Anything unclear? Inking advice welcome (as you can see, I need a lot of practice).

Anyhoo, so far the title may be as boring as Spud Meets The Sodium Bicarbonates. Suggestions?

1. Click on the big graphic below to read the comic.

2. Then fill out this form to let me know what you think.